hehe lol like the fact you took a chibi and made it human almost nice (happy birthday)

that looks kool. i love the guitar on the shirt!

one thing thing though... the eyes kinda freak me out...

oh and

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!!

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salutaions from autralia!!!

love the pic
scary eyes though I myself would redo the whole face (Advanced Critique Encouraged )
Whats with the box around his name
Shadin on Jeans isnt finished by my eyes. Needs moar.
Shading on inner leg is wrong way round o.o
the lighter shading is after the darker there and it should be the other way round.

On a lighter note the entire body structure is perfect the rest of the shading is great the hands in the pockets are really really well drawn and the hair... Oh man I love his hair. It may look like I'm having a go but it tells me too just there. Best work I've seen from you ever. Well done.

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- James.

YAHOO! My very first fanart! YAY!!!!

But - since you wanted "Advanced Critique Encouraged" - I'm gonna give you Advanced Critique. And by that I mean harsh.

The eyes make me wanna die. Srsly.
The body is wa-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-a-y too fat, even for my style. If you look at my newer drawings, they're not obese anymore.
Like Chappeh said, the pants shading is incomplete.
AND PUHLEEZ USE A SKINNIER BRUSH.

However, the positive side is that the hair is good, the guitar is AMAZING AMAZING. It looks like professional drawing.

In conclusion - Sushi Buddies in detail: NONO.

But good job anyway.

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WOOF goes the cow!

thanks maaz.

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Skill is the destination.
The only road to Skill is Practice.
Talent is a horse, Materials, the fodder.
Skill is attainable without Talent, but it is a long, hard walk.
Skill is unattainable without Practice.

omg whoops I mean alex.

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Skill is the destination.
The only road to Skill is Practice.
Talent is a horse, Materials, the fodder.
Skill is attainable without Talent, but it is a long, hard walk.
Skill is unattainable without Practice.

thanks maaz.

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Skill is the destination.
The only road to Skill is Practice.
Talent is a horse, Materials, the fodder.
Skill is attainable without Talent, but it is a long, hard walk.
Skill is unattainable without Practice.

Whoops. can't beleive I forgot about the flash textbox outline. totally dumb.

WHY YOU THINK EYES SCARY?!
seriously, whats got you spooked?
I know the face is cruddy too.
If I'd really thought that this entire thing was perfect, I would've mentioned in the artist's comments how long it took me to do.
Thank you for pointing out the leg shading mistake.
I now realise that the inside of the left (but on our right) arm is wrong too.
Where is there more need for shading on his jeans?

Thanks, but the face doesn't fit the body structure, because of my neck drawing inexperience.
Really, the shading and the face/neck is the only fall through point.

Did you know/ hear that it is my birthday today?

(15th May)

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Skill is the destination.
The only road to Skill is Practice.
Talent is a horse, Materials, the fodder.
Skill is attainable without Talent, but it is a long, hard walk.
Skill is unattainable without Practice.

Why do "The eyes make you wanna die"?
*checks* I think you should check again.
Your BC is fat. Your characters in 'how about it?' are fat(ish) and you sushi buddies are (a bit) wide.
And why are the legs incomplete?
I NEED MORE PRACTICE WITH SKINNY BRUSHES BEFORE I AM 'UHLEEZED' TO USE A SMALLER BRUSH. I WANTED THIS TO BE AT-LEAST DECENT.

I heartily agree with your conclusion and, unless you dislike some of these things so much that you need me to fix them (which I might do anyways), I shall never draw SB like this again.

Thanks!

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Skill is the destination.
The only road to Skill is Practice.
Talent is a horse, Materials, the fodder.
Skill is attainable without Talent, but it is a long, hard walk.
Skill is unattainable without Practice.

By the eyes making me want to die, it means, they are really really really creepy.
Not as fat as this. O_O
I dunno... they look incomplete.
USE IT ANYWAY.

Just change the eyes and make it look like he hasnt just spent 2 days nonstop eating mince pies.

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WOOF goes the cow!